Next Right Moves

 to get my paper ready by Wednesday i am going to polish my paper,  i will listen to the peer review and take their suggestions into consideration. i feel like i over explain and talk too much so i am going to reread my paper and see if i have things that i can shorten for it to make sense because i just love to talk and ramble which is a big problem with most of my papers i talk too much. I'm going to look at my grammar and formatting as well and make sure everything looks right, grammar is definitely something i struggle with so I'm going to make sure i have everything spelled correctly. 

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