next right moves

 I need to revise my draft and see if there is anything I need to correct or change, I need to lengthen it just a little and maybe I will rewatch the movie again so I can pick up on anything relevant I may have missed. I need to check my grammar as well and go through my draft to make sure everything makes sense and is correct grammar. i will read my review like i am someone else reading it to see what i can change 

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